Sunday 7 September 2008

my poem

high buildings, deep feelings

a man sits atop a high building
he hears sirions, he sees pain, suffering
and yet he's in a fog
he's on his cloud 9
"not any feelings matter but mine" he says
sipping his joe
he thinks he could if he wanted, he could be a god
hold the world like an olive in his hand
and yet he's in a fog

1 comment:

katie J. said...

i wrote this for la class this weekend i'm pretty impressed with it! please tell me what you think feedback is strongly appreatied!